Sunday, 2 October 2016

Adding Detail


     We are learning to add detail to our stories by using our senses.

Mrs Cassels brought some feijoas to school.
We felt them, smelt them, looked at them and tasted them.
then we wrote about them using some of our 5 senses



My feijoa smells tasty.
said Jade


My feijoas tasted fizzy and yummy.My feijoa smelt delicious and fruity. They feel bumpy and soft.
said Ciara.


My feijoa smells like a banana
said William.


The feijoa tasted nice and sweet.They were green and big.
said Ryan

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